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留学生个人陈述技巧及范文

日期:2017-4-28作者:www.51lunwen.com编辑:xiaowa点击次数:162
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个人陈述是出国留学生要准备的一个重要的文书材料,个人陈述的要点与技巧有哪些呢?无忧论文网小编总结了以下几点,一起来看看吧。


1.个人陈述的基本结构。个人陈述主要包含三大块内容。第一,开头,这部分是对自己基本情况的介绍。第二,中间部分,该部分主要又分为四小部分,一是对自己工作经验的介绍;二是对自己的爱好、特长及获得的荣誉进行介绍;三是介绍自己申请留学的原因,未来的学习计划、想要学习的专业方向等;四是对自己学习完成后工作计划的介绍。第三,结尾,该部分需要强调下自己申请留学的强烈愿望。

   2.个人陈述需要注意的技巧。第一,避免撒谎。一定要避免撒谎,不管是家庭条件还是学习背景,都要保证其真实性,你可以凭借自己的能力把普通的经历写的精彩,但一定不可撒谎,一旦老师发现撒谎现象,其必然会对你的个人陈述,甚至你个人产生不好的印象。第二,避免过于华丽的辞藻。提高个人陈述的丰富性、精彩性当然无可厚非,但是若用词过于华丽、生僻往往会适得其反。比说说,为了表现自己词汇的丰富,在写作中利用“utilize”这个词替代“use”,往往会给老师一种哗众取宠的感觉。所以,写个人陈述时一定要谨记“ Don’t use a 10-cent word when a five-cent word will do.”第三,避免打官腔。想必很多留学生都认为个人陈述中所描述的自己似乎和真是存在的自己存在较大的偏差,在写作期间往往会不由自主的打起官腔。比如说,通常情况下你可能会用“Her style of persuasion…”来表述,但写个人陈述的时候就会不自觉的写“The indication of her rhetorical strategy…”。显然后者听起来更加的官方。当然,不让你打官腔也不是说你就可以随意的使用网络语言,这也是需要注意的。第四,不要用鸡毛蒜皮的小事证明大道理。写个人陈述的时候可以从小事着手,但一定要避免写鸡毛蒜皮的消失。比如说,你想要证明自己是个努力的人,你可以写自己去做家庭教师,但一定不要写帮爸妈做家务。第五,不要罗列自己的成就。写个人陈述时一定要避免罗列自己的成就,个人陈述字数本身就不多,且自己获得的荣誉已经在简历上进行了表述就无需进行重复了,过于重复自己的成就、荣誉往往会起到适得其反的效果。

附:酒店管理专业个人陈述范文

Engaged in hotel and catering business has been my dream for a long time. I have been thinking privately to choose my favorite major in high school and it is also my motivation to study. Travelling and tasting delicacies have always been my two great hobbies, and I have constantly fantasized how wonderful it will be to combine the work and life in the future with my interests and hobbies. So I choose Tourism Management (biasing towards hotel management) as my major in university.

The learning contents of my major are more comprehensive, which makes me able to contact much knowledge in related fields. Such studies have made me benefit a lot, understand the knowledge related to the tourism industry and the catering industry more comprehensively, and have a solid foundation and good capacity and further specify the direction of my development-hotel management in the course of continuous learning improvement. With a goal in mind, I have been trying to do well in each step after entering university and reasonably arrange my study and life. At the same time of learning professional knowledge with great efforts and maintaining good grades, I have actively joined the school club activities, organized and participated in various school activities and public-service activities (AIDS Day publicity, care for the children left behind, etc.), and established the “Association for Learning” with several excellent students, which is an organization providing services for students who take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools, graded examinations and English studies, etc. The association was awarded The 10 Best College Associations by Chengdu Youth League in 2009. I have ever served as: Vice Minister of the Department of Culture and Sports of the school Student Apartment Management Committee, Minister of the school “Association for Learning”, Director of the Secretary Department of


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